I don't think the use of 'Impact' for the masthead is the right choice. Use something more inkeeping with the indie genre. Tied up ends is also too big - it looks like the masthead! Move it, move the masthead up and move the Editor box to the contents page. The barcode is massive. 'Jake From the Unlucky Sones' needs to be centralised too, and shifted down so it doesn't go over Jake's chin
I don't think the use of 'Impact' for the masthead is the right choice. Use something more inkeeping with the indie genre. Tied up ends is also too big - it looks like the masthead! Move it, move the masthead up and move the Editor box to the contents page.
ReplyDeleteThe barcode is massive.
'Jake From the Unlucky Sones' needs to be centralised too, and shifted down so it doesn't go over Jake's chin